When I got Braces
When I Got Braces
Heeya Bedi
When I got braces
I was sadly making faces
Two days later, they were just fine
Twinkling and gleaming with a bright shine
Friends asked me, how did you get these
In my mouth they seemed like bumble bees
A week later they troubled me like my brother
Only people to comfort me were my father and mother
Few months later I was screaming in pain
I was able to eat nothing but a piece of grain
And then I had to get an extraction done
Believe me away I wanted to run
A year later my teeth were in line
And I thanked this gentle dentist of mine
End of the day we ought to have style
To show off our beautiful smile.
You write beautifully, my love!!
ReplyDeleteAnd what a beautiful smile you have indeed Heeya, with those pearly pearlies. V v wonderfully written, my child. LOVED your poem
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful way to express gratitude to your dentist..
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written from the heart heeya! God bless!
ReplyDeleteYou've Beautifully described your experience at the dentist.. li'l sis.
ReplyDeleteThis is just pure beautiful. You seem to have a knack of poetry. This reminds me of myself when i was your age. You are much better than me. You leave the reader with a positivity in the end. Intelligence in innocence, Proud of you Heeya.
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